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The give diagram explains how the hydroelectric power station generates the electricity. The give diagram also states what all necessary and systematic procedure is required to generate electricity using this method.

The give diagram explains how the hydroelectric power station generates the electricity. The give diagram also states what all necessary and systematic procedure is required to generate electricity using this method. MyLrL
The waters from the river are collected and store in the High-level reservoir which are connected to the dams. In the day time, the dams are opened resulting to gushing of water from the reservoir. This flow of water is used to generate electricity. As the water flows at such a high speed there is a power station build at the bottom of the dams. This station have Reversible turbines and Generator assembled in them. As the water flows in day time, the Reversible turbines works as generator operator. The flow of water is so massive that the turbines creates and form electricity which are then using generator are distributed to Power lines and National grid. This process works exactly the opposite in the night time. The turbines are used to pump the water back to the high-level reservior. This process is usually done to get all the excess water from over flowing Low-level reservoir. This process is very nature friendly and cost efficient when compared to hydro power plant. So the working of Hydroelectric power station is very systematic, cost efficient, durable and can genrate huge amount of electricity with natural resources without affecting the enivornment.
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waters
from the river
are collected
and store in the High-level reservoir which
are connected
to the dams. In the day time, the dams
are opened
resulting to gushing of
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water
from the reservoir. This
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flow
of
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water
is
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used
to generate electricity.
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As
the
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water
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flows
at such a high speed there is a
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power
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station


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build
at the bottom of the dams. This station
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have
Reversible
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turbines
and Generator assembled in them. As the
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water
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flows
in day time, the Reversible
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turbines
works as generator operator. The
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flow
of
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water
is
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so
massive that the
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turbines
creates and form electricity which are then using generator
are distributed
to
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Power
lines and National grid.

This process works exactly the opposite in the
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night time
. The
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turbines
are
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used
to pump the
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water
back to the high-level
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reservior
. This process is
usually
done to
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get
all the excess
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water
from over flowing Low-level reservoir. This process is
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very
nature friendly and
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cost efficient
when compared to hydro
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power
plant.

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So
the working of Hydroelectric
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power
station is
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very
systematic,
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cost efficient
, durable and can
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genrate
huge amount of electricity with natural resources without affecting the
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enivornment
.

IELTS academic The give diagram explains how the hydroelectric power station generates the electricity. The give diagram also states what all necessary and systematic procedure is required to generate electricity using this method.

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197 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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