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talk about your problem last day

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i made a mistakes last Sunday. It was my friends birthday. We had arrenged meeting at 7 o'clock In a Italian, little restaurant. When I arrived, no one was there, and the waiter didn't have our booking. He said I would sit down and wait for my friends. While I was waiting, a girl came into the restaurant. I recognised her from my old school. She was with hers family, but they asked me to sit at their table. We ordered some food and i forgot about my friends'. Then as we were coming out of the restaurant, I saw theirs.

Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 made a mistakes last Sunday. It was my friends birthday. We had Possible spelling mistake found.arranged
arrenged
 meeting at 7 o'clock In Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
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 Italian, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 restaurant. When I arrived, no one was there, and the waiter didn't have our booking. He said I would sit down and wait for my friends. While I was waiting, a girl came into the restaurant. I Possible spelling mistake. 'recognised' is British English.recognized
recognised
 her from my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 school. She was with hers family, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they asked me to sit at their table. We ordered This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 food and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 forgot about my friends'. Then as we were coming out of the restaurant, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 theirs. 

IELTS academic talk about your problem last day

Academic

American English

1 paragraphs

101 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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