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talk about your problem last day RwL5o
i made a mistakes last Sunday. It was my friends birthday. We had arrenged meeting at 7 o'clock In a Italian, little restaurant. When I arrived, no one was there, and the waiter didn't have our booking. He said I would sit down and wait for my friends. While I was waiting, a girl came into the restaurant. I recognised her from my old school. She was with hers family, but they asked me to sit at their table. We ordered some food and i forgot about my friends'. Then as we were coming out of the restaurant, I saw theirs.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
made a mistakes last Sunday. It was my friends birthday. We had
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arrenged
meeting at 7 o'clock In
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
Italian,
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little
restaurant. When I arrived, no one was there, and the waiter didn't have our booking. He said I would sit down and wait for my friends. While I was waiting, a girl came into the restaurant. I
Possible spelling mistake. 'recognised' is British English.
recognised
her from my
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
school. She was with hers family,
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but
they asked me to sit at their table. We ordered
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some
food and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
forgot about my friends'. Then as we were coming out of the restaurant, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
theirs.
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IELTS academic talk about your problem last day

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
101 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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