Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Geothermal energy used to produce electricity

Geothermal energy used to produce electricity j8M81
The map shows the design of geothermal power plant and also tells about the how electricity is produced through the plant. It is evident from the map that thermal plant in order to produce electricity has to pass through various channels and it is a combination of different equipment’s that push the process until it reaches to its main goal. The cold water is pumped down into the injection well that is 4. 5 km long pipe, then that water enters the geothermal zone, an area surrounded by hot rocks. The water then gets converted into hot water as soon as it reaches the production well. Furthermore, the well makes sure that hot water is pumped out and throws it into condenser. The condenser produces steam into circle like material known as turbine. The duty of turbine is to make sure that steam starts rolling in its area before it reaches generator the checkpoint. Next, the turbine after mixing the steam that has reached its concerned area goes to final stage of the thermal power plant. Finally, the electricity is produced in generator that is powered by turbine.
The map
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
the design of geothermal power plant and
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tells
about
Did you mean "how"?
the how
electricity
is produced
through the plant.

It is evident from the map that thermal plant in order to produce electricity
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
has to
pass through various channels and it is a combination of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
equipment’s that push the process until it reaches to its main goal.

The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is pumped
down into the injection well
that is
4. 5 km long pipe, then that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
enters the geothermal zone, an area surrounded by hot rocks. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
converted into hot
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as it reaches the production well.
Furthermore
, the well
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
sure that hot
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is pumped
out and throws it into condenser. The condenser produces steam into circle like material known as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
turbine
. The duty of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
turbine
is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that steam
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
starts
rolling in its area
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
it reaches generator the checkpoint.
Next
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
turbine
after mixing the steam that has reached its concerned area goes to final stage of the thermal power plant.

Finally
, the electricity
is produced
in generator that
is powered
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
turbine
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic Geothermal energy used to produce electricity

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
188 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Geothermal energy used to produce electricity