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Table shows the rating given by students for facilities provided for three courses

Table shows the rating given by students for facilities provided for three courses b25dQ
The given table reveals the rating given by the scholars towards the amenities provided for three distinct courses by the college, namely Pre-course assessment, Teaching, Tutor, Resources(printed) and other resources. Firstly, with regard to Pre-course assessment the top rating was given for commerce (95%). The students rated the pre-course assessment of Law as good (72%)and of the Economics as an average (59%). Secondly, when considering teaching, the pupil in commerce and Economics are equally satisfied(95%), where as, the Law students given a just above average (62%) for teaching. In addition, When turning towards tutor the satisfaction of the scholars of Commerce, Economics and Law were (95%), (92%) and (76%) respectively. In terms of printed resources and other facilities, the top ratings were given by commerce for both amenities, which were about 86% and 81%. Overall, it’s clear and interesting to note that the students of commerce had the highest satisfaction for all the resources.
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table reveals the rating
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Pre-course
assessment the top rating was
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(95%). The students rated the
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(72%)and of the Economics as an average (59%).
Secondly
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commerce
and Economics are
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where as
, the Law students
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above average (62%) for teaching.

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, When turning towards tutor the satisfaction of the scholars of
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Commerce
, Economics and Law were (95%), (92%) and (76%)
respectively
. In terms of printed resources and other facilities, the top ratings were
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for both amenities, which were about 86% and 81%.

Overall
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clear
and interesting to note that the students of
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commerce
had the highest satisfaction for all the resources.
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IELTS academic Table shows the rating given by students for facilities provided for three courses

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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