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Number of visitors visiting Carribean island

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The line graph below illustrates the number of visitors who visit a particular Caribbean island in the period between 2010 and 2017. It is obvious from the figure, that some of the tourists were staying on cruise ships and other of them staying on the island. We could show in clear view, that the range of travelers who staying on cruise ships was around a quarter millions in 2010, then it's increased dramatically to two millions by the year 2017. In the meantime, the number of visitors staying on the island was above half in the year 2010 and remain steady till the next year, increasing rapidly again to the year 2013, then became stable until it's reached one and a half millions by 2017. The total number of tourists was raised rapidly from 2010 to its highest in 2017 from one to four millions travelers. To sum up, the amount of visitors who's staying on cruise ships was more than those who's staying on the island by around a half million.

The line graph below illustrates the number of visitors who visit a particular Caribbean island in the period between 2010 and 2017.

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