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The table shows how much electricity a typical hospital consume in each country. Summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table provides information about the usage of electricity in a hospital in five different countries (France, Canada, Japan, Russia, and Argentina) in the year 2014, and is measured in megawatts. Overall, it is clear that some hospitals experienced high amounts of spending power, while others witnessed fluctuations and low numbers. To begin with, French and Japanese hospitals had a similar pattern in the consumption of electricity. Both of them spent the most electricity and saw fluctuations over the week as their highest figures were both in the middle and on weekends. They peaked at 33 and 19 respectively. Moving to Canada and Russia as both rose dramatically at the end of the week going from 26 to 38 and from 12 to 24 respectively. On the other hand, Argentina’s hospital was the least to consume power. Their highest number was 10 megawatts on Tuesday, and the lowest was 5 on Sunday.
The table provides information about the usage of electricity in a
hospital
in five
different
countries (France, Canada, Japan, Russia, and Argentina) in the year 2014, and
is measured
in megawatts.

Overall
, it is
clear
that
some
hospitals
experienced high amounts of spending power, while others witnessed fluctuations and low numbers.

To
begin
with, French and Japanese
hospitals
had a similar pattern in the consumption of electricity. Both of them spent the most electricity and
saw
fluctuations over the week as their highest figures were both in the middle and on weekends. They peaked at 33 and 19
respectively
.

Moving to Canada and Russia as both rose
dramatically
at the
end
of the week going from 26 to 38 and from 12 to 24
respectively
.

On the other hand
, Argentina’s
hospital
was the least to consume power. Their highest number was 10 megawatts on Tuesday, and the lowest was 5 on Sunday.
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