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flow chart of producing electricity

flow chart of producing electricity aQn39
Given is the graph providing us with information regarding the electricity generation through the usage of geothermal energy. Overall, it is starkly apparent this process is included five steps that are being happened under plus on the ground. The process commences when the cold water is being pumped below the ground from the reservoir via a special tube of 4. 5 km in length. In the following stage, cold water is led to the geothermal zone where the hot rocks and stones are placed there by means of the injection well. In this stage, water becomes warmer than in the past to reach the boiling point. During the next stage, warm water is pumped up again via the production well with the same length of 4. 5 km. In the stage after, the steam from the water evaporation is being condensed in the particular tank. then the condensed steam enters the turbine and makes the turbine moves in a circular way to generate electric power. The process comes to end when the electricity has been produced in the generator and has been transferred to pylons.
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Given
is the graph providing us with information regarding the electricity generation through the usage of geothermal energy.

Overall
, it is
starkly
apparent this process
is included
five steps that are
being happened
under plus on the ground.

The process commences when the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
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water
is
being pumped
below the ground from the reservoir via a special tube of 4. 5 km in length. In the following
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stage
,
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cold
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is led
to the geothermal zone where the hot rocks and stones
are placed
there by means of the injection well. In this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stage
,
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water
becomes warmer than in the past to reach the boiling point. During the
next
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stage
, warm
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water
is pumped
up again via the production well with the same length of 4. 5 km.

In the
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stage
after, the steam from the
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water
evaporation is
being condensed
in the particular tank.
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then
the condensed steam enters the turbine and
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makes
the turbine
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moves
Consider replacing "in a circular way" with the adverb for "circular"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a circular way
to generate electric power. The process
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comes
to
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end
when the electricity has
been produced
in the generator and has
been transferred
to pylons.
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IELTS academic flow chart of producing electricity

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  American English
4 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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