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The map shows the library of 2001 and 2009.

The map shows the library of 2001 and 2009. b29AB

The given to maps illustrate the outline depicting what the library looked like in 2001 and 2009. Overall, it can be seen that a plethora of changes had done on the ground floor. Moreover, a principal modification was the addition of children area and the extra sections for books. Looking at the graph in more detail in 2001 on the left side there were self help and history section, while numerous other facilities added after 8 years such as kitchen, economics and law. Moreover, fiction shelf was moved to place children's books. Besides this, right side section of newspapers and periodicals removed to provide film and DVDs section. Furthermore, near this movies and DVDs area computers were put. Apart from this, tables which were placed in the centre, merged with each other in a single row and children's area opened near it. However, some amenities remained unchanged on the ground floor of a library such as the entrance, a librarian's desk and the stairs.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 to maps illustrate the outline depicting what the library looked like in 2001 and 2009.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that a plethora of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 had done on the This word is British English. Did you mean "first floor"?first floor
ground floor
. Moreover
, a principal modification was the addition of children area and the extra You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
sections
 for books.

Looking at the graph in more detail in 2001 on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side there were self This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 and history You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
, while numerous other facilities This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 after 8 years such as kitchen, economics and law. Moreover
, fiction shelf was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to place children's books. Besides
 this, right side You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
 of newspapers and periodicals removed to provide film and DVDs You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
. Furthermore
, near Did you mean "these"?these
this
 movies and DVDs area computers were put
. Apart from this, tables which were placed
 in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
, merged with each other in a single row and children's area opened near it.

However
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 amenities remained unchanged on the This word is British English. Did you mean "first floor"?first floor
ground floor
 of a library such as the entrance, a librarian's desk and the stairs. 