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Study the following graph, which depicts monthly attendance rates for the Shanghai Library in 2010. Write a report for a university lecturer summarizing the information below

Study the following graph, which depicts monthly attendance rates for the Shanghai Library in 2010. Write a report for a university lecturer summarizing the information below R2k9V

The graph presents the monthly attendance rates experienced by the Shanghai Library in 2010. The overall trend of the data depicts a somewhat steady increase; however, minor downward deviations occur at two points in the year. Following the year’s start of 35, 000 library visitors in January, a clear drop in attendance rates can be seen, with the data showing its most major trough in February at about 28, 000. But attendance rebounds in March to approximately 39, 000, and climbs steadily by about 5000 people over the next three months to its first peak of 44, 000 in June. Then attendance drops again to the year’s second trough of 37, 000 in July before starting a four-month climb to 45, 000 in November. This month marks the second and highest peak depicted in the chart. December finishes just slightly weaker than the previous month at 44, 000. The year-end figure marks a 9, 000-person increase on January.

The graph presents the monthly You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappearanceparticipationpresence
attendance
 rates experienced by the Shanghai

Library in 2010. The overall
 trend of the data depicts a somewhat steady

increase; however
, minor downward deviations occur at two points in the year. Following the year’s This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 of 35, 000 library visitors in January, a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 drop

in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappearanceparticipationpresence
attendance
 rates can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
, with the data showing its most major trough in

February at about 28, 000. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
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attendance
 rebounds in March to approximately

39, 000, and climbs steadily
 by about 5000 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 over the next
 three months to

its first
 peak of 44, 000 in June. Then You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappearanceparticipationpresence
attendance
 drops again to the year’s second

trough of 37, 000 in July This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 starting a four-month climb to 45, 000 in November.

This month marks the second and highest peak depicted in the chart. December

finishes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
slightly
 weaker than the previous month at 44, 000. The year-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end


figure marks a 9, 000-person increase on January. 