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Table show number of visitors in ashadown museum and the pie cahrt shows about their satisfaction

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The table and chart illustrates about the number of visitors Visit to Ashdown museum during the year before and after it refurbished and the Chur delineates about the visitors Satisfaction. In general most of the visitors comes after the refurbishment of the museum, before that Comparing to after the number of visitors care quire less, while we checking the visitors satisfaction before the refurbishment most of them are unhappy than after upgrade. In Common their is an huge difference shall seen after the museum refurbishment amount 18, 000 more people are to be increased and the most of the visitors have a possitive satisfaction also. Infact they ente might be a lower portion of Visitors have neither good or bad arguments HATH are reported also the after the renovation 40% of visitors are pleasured
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IELTS academic Table show number of visitors in ashadown museum and the pie cahrt shows about their satisfaction

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  American English
3 paragraphs
133 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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