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Table below shows average monthly rainfall in two different cities

Table below shows average monthly rainfall in two different cities gD1ld
in the city of Woodsville average amount of rain in January is 5 inches and as we go forward raining is decreasing, where we have 4 inches in February, 3. 75 inches in March, 2. 5 inches in April, 1. 75 inches in May, 1. 5 inches in June, and at the lowest amount we have only 0. 75 inches of raining in July. from August we can see the rainfall starts increasing again where we reach 1 inch in August, 1. 5 inches in September, 3 inches in October, and at the most rainfall month of the year is November with 6 inches and 5. 5 in December. On the other hand in the city of Blacksboro, we have a different situation. at the beginning of the year, we have 3 inches of rain in January. as we go forward we see 4 inches of rainfall in February and this is where the rainfall starts decreasing. where we have 2. 5 inches of rainfall in March, 1 inch in April, 0. 25 in May, 0. 1 inches in June, at the lowest amount of the year with only 0. 01 inches in July, 0. 04 inches in October, 1 inch in November, and 2. 5 inches in December. as we can see the average monthly rainfall in the city of Woodsville is more than Blacksboro.
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5 inches
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4 inches
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