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Table about underground railway systems in 6 cities

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The table provides information about underground railway systems in 6 different cities with information regarding the opening date, length of the railway and the number of passengers every year which is measured in millions. Overall, the London railway system is the oldest and the longest railway that has ever been constructed. Furthermore, the most crowded train system is in Tokyo. In 1863, the London opened their railway system to the public. This is the oldest railway system and the only one that was built in 1863. In terms of length, this system is one of the longest one with 394 kilometres of route. In contrast, the latest railway, which was built in 2001 in Los Angeles, only has 28 km of route. Some of the systems which were opened in the 1900s are in Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC and Kyoto. Out of all of these countries, the longest one exists in Paris with the route length of 199km, although this is still shorter when compared to the London railway. Additionally, one of the train system with the largest number of passengers per year is in Tokyo. Every year, it helps 1928 millions of customer commute from one area to the other. The number of passenger served per year is 800 millions higher when compared to the railway in Paris.

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