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The carbon cicle in nature

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The picture shows the flow of carbons, which is exchanged among biosphere, hydrosphere, and atmosphere. We can see on this diagram 4 steps of carbon cicle, that include the photosynthesis, respiration, decomposition and combustion. The carbon cycle describes the process in which carbon atoms continually travel from the atmosphere to the Earth and then back into the atmosphere. The trees and plants absorb the carbon from atmosphere due to the photosynthesis. It is plant respiration. Respiration, excretion, and decomposition release the carbon back into the atmosphere or soil, continuing the cycle. The ocean also cycles CO2 with the atmosphere, in an almost perfect balance. Human activities are known to be negatively affecting this cycle.
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the flow of
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carbons
, which
is exchanged
among biosphere, hydrosphere, and
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atmosphere
. We can
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see
on this diagram 4 steps of
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carbon
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cicle
, that include the photosynthesis, respiration, decomposition and combustion. The
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carbon
cycle
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describes
the process in which
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carbon
atoms
continually
travel from the
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atmosphere
to the Earth and then back into the atmosphere.

The trees and plants absorb the
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carbon
from
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atmosphere
due to the photosynthesis. It is plant respiration. Respiration, excretion, and decomposition release the
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carbon
back into the
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atmosphere
or soil, continuing the cycle.

The ocean
also
cycles CO2 with the
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atmosphere
, in an almost perfect balance.

Human activities
are known
to be
negatively
affecting this cycle.
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