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The given bar chart illustrates the information in percentage of actual feel reported in surveys for the lives in London over the period of three years

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The given bar chart illustrates the information in percentage of actual feel reported in surveys for the lives in London over the period of three years. Overall, the figure for museums, galleries and also transports tended to increase slightly, while the other sectors all witnessed a decrease for over three years. On the one hand, the range of shops and job opportunities account for the most significant priority of life in London, more than 40% and 35% respectively in the first years. However, they soon witnessed a slight decrease in the next 2 years. On the other hand, though starting at a lower point, views about museums and galleries, nightlife and transportation registered a slight improvement from 22% to 25% and 20% to 22% respectively.
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bar chart illustrates the information in percentage of actual feel reported in surveys for the
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lives
in London over the period of three years.

Overall
, the figure for museums, galleries and
also
transports tended to increase
slightly
, while the other sectors all witnessed a decrease for over three years.

On the one hand, the range of shops and job opportunities account for the most significant priority of life in London, more than 40% and 35%
respectively
in the
first
years.
However
, they
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soon
witnessed a slight decrease in the
next
2 years.

On the other hand
, though starting at a lower point, views about museums and galleries, nightlife and transportation registered a slight improvement from 22% to 25% and 20% to 22%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The given bar chart illustrates the information in percentage of actual feel reported in surveys for the lives in London over the period of three years

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