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Supply of renewable energy in 4 different countries

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The information about the percentage of renewable energy in the total supply in 8 year of span in four nations is depicted by rendered vertical bar chart. The data has been calibrated in percentage. Overall, i can vividly manifested that norway has the highest percentage of renewable in the whole period follower bye iceland while Australia has the lowest percentage To begin with, in 2000 norway had the highest renevable energy with 62% followed by iceland with only 10% less renewable energy. Where ad, australia and germany had only 10%and 12%similarly in 2004, norway rose to 4% of renewable energy and germany had a 5% increase respectively. Interestingly iceland had a 7% rise in renewable energy. moreover, there had been dramatic rose seen in renewable energy by norway, it accounted for 79%in 2007 while in australia and iceland exprences decline in energy supply, it compriced to 9% and 55% respectively
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in the total supply in 8 year of span in four nations
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IELTS academic Supply of renewable energy in 4 different countries

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