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Supermarkets are the best places to buy food. agree or disagree?

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I think supermarkets are the most convenient and greatest places to buy food Firstly, the strict process to launch products will help customers feel more confident than buying at the market. At the supermarket, the items are checked and carefully selected, then stored in the freezer to ensure the freshness of the food. Besides, the supermarket provides a large number of products with more stable and better prices and is always guaranteed to be within the expiry date. For example, products available in the supermarket such as spices or snacks always have fixed prices and are less volatile according to market value Furthermore, higher service is part of what makes supermarkets more attractive to customers. Parking lots or restrooms will help customers feel secure and comfortable when entering the supermarket. Besides, the large space and air-conditioner help customers feel more comfortable when waiting in crowded booths. Products are arranged under one roof to make it easier for customers to find what they want to buy. For example, seasonings such as salt and sugar will be placed in the same stall so that users can easily search and purchase
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supermarkets are the most convenient and greatest places to
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food

Firstly
, the strict process to launch
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products
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help
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customers
feel more confident than buying at the market. At the supermarket, the items are
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checked
and
carefully
selected, then stored in the freezer to ensure the freshness of the food.
Besides
, the supermarket provides
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a large number of
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products
with more stable and better prices and is always guaranteed to be within the expiry date.
For example
,
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products
available in the supermarket such as spices or snacks always have
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fixed
prices and are less volatile according to market
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value


Furthermore
, higher service is part of what
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makes
supermarkets more attractive to
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customers
. Parking lots or restrooms will
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help
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customers
feel secure and comfortable when entering the supermarket.
Besides
, the large space and air-conditioner
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help
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customers
feel more comfortable when waiting in crowded booths.
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Products
are arranged
under one roof to
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make
it easier for
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customers
to find what they want to
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buy
.
For example
, seasonings such as salt and sugar will
be placed
in the same stall
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so
that users can
easily
search and
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purchase
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IELTS academic Supermarkets are the best places to buy food. agree or disagree?

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  American English
3 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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