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The map below shows the development of village ryemouth from 1995to present time

The map below shows the development of village ryemouth from 1995to present time yLPgD
The information regarding the alterations, that occured in the Ryemouth village from 1995 to present time period. Hawing an overview, it is crystal clear that the village area witnessed dramatic changes, certain areas such as forest and fish market are completely demolisted in order to built new amenities. After having a myopic observation, it is identified that the forest park, which was located in the east side, is now chopped downto extend the farm land, which is modified into golf and tennis courts; However, the hotel present on the right side at the junction of road remain unchanged; while a car park is established near to it. Moreover, the shops that were present on the right side of the road are removed and replaced with restaurants. Likewise, the fish market located opposite to the shops is vanished in order to built more appartments. On further analysis, the residential areas also get expand as well as a new road is constructed near to the housing area. Besides these renovations, fishing port is completely flattened in present time.
The information regarding the alterations, that
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Ryemouth
village from 1995 to
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present
time period.

Hawing an overview, it is crystal
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clear
that the village
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area
witnessed dramatic
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changes
, certain
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areas
such as forest and fish market are completely
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demolisted
in order to
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built
new amenities.

After having a myopic observation, it
is identified
that the forest park, which
was located
in the east side, is
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now
chopped
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downto
extend the farm land, which
is modified
into golf and tennis courts;
However
, the hotel
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present
on the right side at the junction of road remain unchanged; while a car park
is established
near to it.
Moreover
, the shops that were
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present
on the right side of the road
are removed
and replaced with restaurants.
Likewise
, the fish market located opposite to the shops
is vanished
in order to
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built
more
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appartments
.

On
further
analysis, the residential
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areas
also
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get
expand
as well
as a new road
is constructed
near to the housing
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area
.
Besides
these renovations, fishing port is completely flattened in
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present
time.
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