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Discuss the followings-food: -Food resources for this element -Biological role in human body -Effect of deficiency of this element on human body -References

Discuss the followings-food: -Food resources for this element -Biological role in human body -Effect of deficiency of this element on human body -References nxRDn

I believe that fruit is the food that our bodies need the most because it contains a lot of vitamins and minerals. For example, strawberries contain vitamin C. Vitamin C is important because it strengthens the walls of blood vessels. It also increases iron absorption from the gastrointestinal tract. Consuming large amounts of iron increases the risk of colon cancer, as it increases the formation of carcinogenic nitroso compounds in the digestive system. Vitamin C also reduces the chances of developing atherosclerosis. When atherosclerosis causes heart disease, which is the most dangerous disease. Vitamin C strengthens the immune system to attack the infection, and if vitamin C deficiency weakens the body's immunity.

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risk
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 compounds in the digestive system. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfoodfibermineral
Vitamin
 C also
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dangerous
 disease. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfoodfibermineral
Vitamin
 C strengthens the immune system to attack the infection, and if You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfoodfibermineral
vitamin
 C deficiency weakens the body's immunity. 