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The given table provides Information about the underground line systems in 6 different cities: two European capitals London and Paris, 2 Japanese cities: Tokyo and Kyoto and ameriran towns Washinton D. C and Los Angeles. THE data is compared by the length of the railways, the opening year, and the numbers of users. Overall, London detain the oldest and in the main time the longuest subway system, while Tokyo’s underground serves the biggest number of people. In the other hand the shortest and less used underground railway is Kyoto’s. The English capital inaugurated his railway in the middle of the 19th century, exactely in 1863, and the londonian underground is considerated the oldest and in main time the longuest one with 394 km, which represent the double of the second longest system which is the Parisian one. Kyoto, have the shortest lines by only 11 kilometrs of route, and attract just 45 million users per annum: The lowest proportion of passengers comparing to all the other cities which is quite similar with the number of users of the newest American underground in Los Angeles opened in 2001. In a strike contrast the second Japanese transportation system is the one that serves the huge the number of people with 1928 passangers every year.
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table provides Information about the
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underground
line
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systems
in 6
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different
cities: two European capitals London and Paris, 2 Japanese cities: Tokyo and Kyoto and
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ameriran
towns
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Washinton
D. C and Los Angeles. THE data
is compared
by the length of the railways, the opening year, and the
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numbers
of users.

Overall
, London
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the oldest and in the main time the
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longuest
subway
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system
, while Tokyo’s
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underground
serves the biggest
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number
of
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people
. In the other hand the shortest and less
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used
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underground
railway is Kyoto’s.

The English capital inaugurated his railway in the middle of the 19th century,
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exactely
in 1863, and the
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londonian
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underground
is
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considerated
the oldest and in main time the
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longuest
one with 394 km, which represent the double of the second longest
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system
which is the Parisian one.

Kyoto, have the shortest lines by
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only
11
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kilometrs
of route, and attract
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just
45 million users per annum: The lowest proportion of passengers comparing to all the other cities which is quite similar with the
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number
of users of the newest American
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underground
in Los Angeles opened in 2001. In a strike contrast the second Japanese transportation
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system
is the one that serves the huge the
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number
of
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people
with 1928
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passangers
every year.
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6.0
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