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summerise the charts below and make comparison where relevant

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The given pie charts illustrate the percentage of living expenses in Japanese and Malaysian houses during the year of 2010. OVerall, in both countries, accommodation, food and others good and services are the three highest spending cathegories, while health care was the category where the less money was spent. During 2010, Malaysian household spent more than the third of their budget on housing, comapred with 21 % in Japan, however in term of food, people in both countries spent approximately the same amount of money, 27% in Malaysia and 24% in Japan. Meanwhile almost the third of the budget was dedicated to other goods and services in both countries, the figure accounted for 29% and 26% in Japan and Malaysoa respectively. In a strike contrast, health care made up for only 6% of the total of the spending in Japan and 3% in Malaysia.

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 pie charts illustrate the percentage of living expenses in Japanese and Malaysian This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 during the year of 2010.

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OVerall
, in both countries, accommodation, food This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:and many more
and others
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good
 and services are the three highest spending Possible spelling mistake found.categories
cathegories
, while health care was the category where the less money was spent
.

During 2010, Malaysian household spent more than the third of their budget on housing, Possible spelling mistake found.compared
comapred
 with 21 % in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withglazevarnishlacquerstaincoating
Japan
, however
 in term of food, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in both countries spent approximately the same amount of money, 27% in Malaysia and 24% in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withglazevarnishlacquerstaincoating
Japan
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Meanwhile,
Meanwhile
 almost the third of the budget was dedicated
 to other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 and services in both countries, the figure accounted for 29% and 26% in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withglazevarnishlacquerstaincoating
Japan
 and Possible spelling mistake found.Malaysia
Malaysoa
respectively
. In a strike contrast, health care made up for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 6% of the total of the spending in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withglazevarnishlacquerstaincoating
Japan
 and 3% in Malaysia. 