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The two maps display the infrastructure of an island previously and after construction. Overall, there have been numerous significant changes occurred on the island, while it became as a highly populated area. Earlier, island was a bare land with small palm trees and a beech, which was located in the west side. After the developmental process, infrastructure has changed completely. A restaurant has been built in the north side of the peninsula, which is connected to the separate reception building near to the entrance. Also, there are two accommodation colonies built in each side of the reception, and they are connected by tiny paths. All tiny paths were connected to the vehicle track which is arising from the entrance. There is a pier from the entrance, where the boats are tied. And the beach has been modified for swimming. However, there is no changes in the palm tree population. Total area has become a populated area with numerous facilities.
The two maps display the infrastructure of an island previously and after construction.

Overall
, there have been numerous significant
changes
occurred on the island, while it became as a
highly
populated area.

Earlier, island was a bare land with
small
palm trees and a beech, which
was located
in the west side.

After the developmental process, infrastructure has
changed
completely. A restaurant has
been built
in the north side of the peninsula, which
is connected
to the separate reception building near to the entrance.
Also
, there are two accommodation colonies built in each side of the reception, and they
are connected
by tiny paths. All tiny paths
were connected
to the vehicle
track
which is arising from the entrance. There is a pier from the entrance, where the boats
are tied
. And the beach has
been modified
for swimming.
However
, there is no
changes
in the palm tree population.

Total area has become a populated area with numerous facilities.
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159 words
6.5
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