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celebrities are role model of young people

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Some celebrities are role model of young people. They hard working in their life. They achieved fame with their struggle, one who want to sucess in big life then they have to do more work. For example, Jackie chann was the famous artist, with hard worked and struggled he became a role model for young people. His appearance also motivate individuals. who did great effort in his life definately succeed in one day.

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