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The influence of human beings on the world ecosystem is leading to extinction of spices and loss of bio-diversity

The influence of human beings on the world ecosystem is leading to extinction of spices and loss of bio-diversity BLRaa

It has been a burning question of the day, that human activities are leading to the extension of species as well as the collapse of bio-diversity. In this essay, I will discuss what causes the extinction of plants and animals, as well as solutions to control it. Let's begin by looking at the causes of the extinction. For various purposes like food, luxury, and decoration purposes, humans have started depending on animals. These activities lead to the whipping out of some spices. In India, for instance, cheats are extended because their skin is considered luxurious. Secondly, for human needs such as transportation, rapid urbanization, and reservoirs Are led to the collapse of habitat in forests. To emphasize these let me share an example that I witnessed. Due to the construction of dams, a spice called salmon had lost their habitat and now it became an endangered spices.

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 as the collapse of bio-diversity. In this essay, I will discuss what causes the extinction of plants and animals, as well
 as solutions to control it.

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