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Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. yMRd
The given column graph illustrates the sales of candy in 1994. It is clear from the graph that the highest profit gained in the month of May from candy sales. In 1994, almost 40% of profit generated in January; while, this figure decreased slightly and stood at 35% in the following month. After in next month, there was a rapid growth in candy sales and accounted at almost 60% in March. The month of May, the profit reached at the top. Approximatly, 72% of candy sales occured in this month. However, this ratio decreased by 34% in June. Which was the lowest figure in first six months. In addtion, about 54% of candy sales occured in July. But, in the following two months this ratio decresaed by 40%. In the month of Octmber, there was a rapid growth in candy sales and reached by 62%. In contrast, only 16% of candy sale ran in december in 1994. Overall, it can be seen that the candy sale business experienced a lot of flucuation in their sale in 1994.
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column graph illustrates the
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of
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in 1994. It is
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clear
from the graph that the highest profit gained in the
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month
of May from
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candy
sales.

In 1994, almost 40% of profit generated in January; while, this figure decreased
slightly
and stood at 35% in the following
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month
. After in
next
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month
, there was a rapid growth in
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candy
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sales
and accounted at almost 60% in March. The
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month
of May, the profit reached at the top.
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, 72% of
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candy
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sales
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occured
in this
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month
.
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, this ratio decreased by 34% in June.
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was the lowest figure in
first
six months.

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, about 54% of
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candy
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sales
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in July.
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, in the following two
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this ratio
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decresaed
by 40%. In the
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of
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Octmber
, there was a rapid growth in
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candy
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sales
and reached by 62%.
In contrast
,
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only
16% of
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candy
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sale
ran in
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december
in 1994.

Overall
, it can be
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that the
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business experienced
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in 1994.
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IELTS academic Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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4 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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