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The table below shows the percentage of electronic products used in UK homes in 2005 and 2008.

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The table reavels different percentage of electronic things which were used in the UK families over 3 years from 2005 to 2008 It is evident that over 3 years all electronic pruducts increased, in the fact that they did not come across with declines between 2005 and 2008 In 2005 the usage of TV was 93 per cent and it rose only 1 per cent in 2008. However, when it comes to humidifier it grew 3 times from 20 per cent to 62 per cent over 3 years. During the period the need of people who live in Great Britain for computers saw great increase from 50 to 72 per cent But washing machine did not faceany change. In 2008 usage of video recorder decreased to 65 per cent from 82 percent. Among these electronic products digital camera saw sognificant growth, that is to say i climbed 6 times larger in 2008 than in 2005
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IELTS academic The table below shows the percentage of electronic products used in UK homes in 2005 and 2008.

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