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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. noP2
The two maps show the island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. The first map is the representation pf the island before construction. This land has a dense canopy of trees. The trees provide a lot of oxygen. These trees formed a beautiful spot for tourism or vacation. Hence, the construction for accommodating people. The second map is the representation of the developed island. In the second map, we can see the reception straight from the pier. The reception contains all the amenities it should have. Behind the reception is the restaurant where people can eat food. On the far left side of the island is the beach. Near the beach, a swimming pool is constructed. The accommodation for people are constructed on both sides of the reception. These accommodations include all the facilities. A footpath is constructed to connect all the places. A vehicle track is also constructed to connect the pier, reception and restaurant. A small port is developed for transportation where sails can be docked.
The two
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maps
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show
the
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island
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before
and after the construction of
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some
tourist facilities. The
first
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map
is the representation pf the
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island
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before
construction. This land has a dense canopy of trees. The trees provide
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a lot of
oxygen. These trees formed a
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beautiful
spot for tourism or vacation.
Hence
, the construction for accommodating
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people
. The second
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map
is the representation of the developed
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island
. In the second
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map
, we can
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see
the
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reception
straight from the pier. The
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reception
contains all the amenities it should have. Behind the
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reception
is the restaurant where
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people
can eat food. On the far
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left
side of the
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island
is the beach. Near the beach, a swimming pool is
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constructed
. The accommodation for
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people
are
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constructed
on both sides of the
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reception
. These accommodations include all the facilities. A footpath is
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constructed
to connect all the places. A vehicle
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track
is
also
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constructed
to connect the pier,
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reception
and restaurant.
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small
port
is developed
for transportation where sails can
be docked
.
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IELTS academic Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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