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The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and present. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and present. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. q7ED
The two maps show the layout of the same seaside village in 1995 and at present. Overall, it is evident that the infrastructure for housing and recreation has increased at the expense of agricultural land and commercial fishing. The most notable changes are the disappearance of the fishing port and adjacent fish market, as well as the creation of a golf course and tennis courts in the north-east, where farmland and a forest park were still found in 1995. Furthermore, a new housing development containing apartments is now found on the waterfront at the former site of the fish market, and a number of restaurants have been built on the opposite side of the road where shops used to be. There was also an increase in the total number of houses, from 12 in 1995 to 16 at present. In addition, the road encircling a small housing development west of the main road has been extended further westward. The hotel and cafe in the south-east have remained as is. A new car park has been added next to the hotel.
The two maps
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show
the layout of the same seaside village in 1995 and at present.

Overall
, it is evident that the infrastructure for housing and recreation has increased at the expense of agricultural land and commercial fishing.

The most notable
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changes
are the disappearance of the fishing port and adjacent fish market,
as well
as the creation of a golf course and tennis courts in the north-east, where farmland and a forest park were
still
found in 1995.
Furthermore
, a new housing development containing apartments is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
found on the waterfront at the former site of the fish market, and a number of restaurants have
been built
on the opposite side of the road where shops
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used
to be.

There was
also
an increase in the total number of
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houses
, from 12 in 1995 to 16 at present.
In addition
, the road encircling a
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small
housing development west of the main road has
been extended
further
westward.

The hotel and
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cafe
in the south-east have remained as is. A new car park has been
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added
next
to the hotel.
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IELTS academic The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and present. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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5 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
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