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The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010. daYE
The given bar chart illustrates the postion of part time workers who work in four countries from 1980 to 2010. Overall, it is lucid that the ratio of part time workers who do work in Scotland was least in the given period wheras in Wales the percentage of workers was most. It is aqua clear from the chart that in England, the ratio of part time workers were approximately one quarter in 1980 while in 2010, it was just over 30%. Moreover, the portion of part time workers in Northern lreland were around 15% in both years 1980 and 2010. It is crystal clear from the chart that workers who were work in part time in Scotland their percentage was least in 1980 rather than others. In Wales, the most portion of part time workers in here country. There was one third percentage of workers in 1980 and 2010.
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who work in four countries from 1980 to 2010.

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who do work in Scotland was least in the
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in Wales the percentage of
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was most.

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from the chart that in England, the ratio of
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time
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were approximately one quarter in 1980 while in 2010, it was
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over 30%.
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, the portion of
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in Northern
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were around 15% in both years 1980 and 2010.

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from the chart that
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who were work in
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in Scotland their percentage was least in 1980
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than others. In Wales, the most portion of
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in here country. There was one third percentage of
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in 1980 and 2010.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010.

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