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Summarise the information about the basic steps of constructing a house.

Summarise the information about the basic steps of constructing a house. 7Rey

The diagram shows how to build a standard one floor house in four steps. In the first stage, foundation of the house have to be dug, and filled with concreate which is dried for 24 hours. Once it is done, some waste water pipes must be made in the concrete before setting up the pillars and the beams. Also, four holes must be made in the concrete one in each corner. These holes are for the main pillars and the beams. The pillars and the beams fitted on top of them to finish main house frame. In the second stage, walls are added and insulation is added inside the walls to keep inside house warm. In addition, flooring is laid. In the third stage, roof is put on the house. Window frame and door are put on the house too. At this stage, the house is almost complete. In the final stage, the gas, water, and electricity systems are installed. Also, interior, and exterior such as post and garden are decorated.

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shows
 how to build a standard It appears that a hyphen is missing.one-floor
one floor
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house
 in four steps.

In the first
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stage
, foundation of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
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have to
be dug
, and filled with Possible spelling mistake found.concretecon create
concreate
 which is dried
 for 24 hours. Once it is done
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some
 waste water pipes This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be made
 in the concrete This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 setting up the pillars and the beams. Also
, four holes This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be made
 in the concrete one in each corner. These holes are for the main pillars and the beams. The pillars and the beams fitted on top of them to finish main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 frame.

In the second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, walls are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 and insulation is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 inside the walls to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 inside You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 warm. In addition
, flooring is laid
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
 the third You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, roof is put
 on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
. Window frame and door are put
 on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 too. At this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 is almost complete.

In the final You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, the gas, water, and electricity systems are installed
. Also
, interior, and exterior such as post and garden are decorated
. 