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Summarise the information about the basic steps of constructing a house.

Summarise the information about the basic steps of constructing a house. 7Rey
The diagram shows how to build a standard one floor house in four steps. In the first stage, foundation of the house have to be dug, and filled with concreate which is dried for 24 hours. Once it is done, some waste water pipes must be made in the concrete before setting up the pillars and the beams. Also, four holes must be made in the concrete one in each corner. These holes are for the main pillars and the beams. The pillars and the beams fitted on top of them to finish main house frame. In the second stage, walls are added and insulation is added inside the walls to keep inside house warm. In addition, flooring is laid. In the third stage, roof is put on the house. Window frame and door are put on the house too. At this stage, the house is almost complete. In the final stage, the gas, water, and electricity systems are installed. Also, interior, and exterior such as post and garden are decorated.
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shows
how to build a standard
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one floor
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house
in four steps.

In the
first
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stage
, foundation of the
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house
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have to
be dug
, and filled with
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concreate
which
is dried
for 24 hours. Once it
is done
,
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some
waste water pipes
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must
be made
in the concrete
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before
setting up the pillars and the beams.
Also
, four holes
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must
be made
in the concrete one in each corner. These holes are for the main pillars and the beams. The pillars and the beams fitted on top of them to finish main
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house
frame.

In the second
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stage
, walls are
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added
and insulation is
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added
inside the walls to
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keep
inside
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house
warm.
In addition
, flooring
is laid
.

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In
the third
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stage
, roof
is put
on the
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house
. Window frame and door
are put
on the
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house
too. At this
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stage
, the
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house
is almost complete.

In the final
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stage
, the gas, water, and electricity systems
are installed
.
Also
, interior, and exterior such as post and garden
are decorated
.

IELTS academic Summarise the information about the basic steps of constructing a house.

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171 words
6.0
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