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Summarise the detail in these maps

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The two maps illustrate significant changes in the island transformed into the coastal village containing all of the new services. Overall, the region developed substantially from an uninhabited area to a tourist attraction. Obviously, Infrastructure and amenities increased, along with the area's capacity to provide for tourists. As the original plan reveals, there was no living in the land. The northern and southern parts of the region was the sea. In contrast, the island had perserved the trees. However, the area had reformed into a holiday destination, attracting much more sightseers who were accommodated in new holiday cottages in the central and western side of the land. To provide services for guests, a reception office had been built between the tourist accommodations, encircling by a vehicle track to access to new facilities including a pier as well as a restaurant that backs on to it. Similarly, in the center, a new footpath connects the settlements with each other, while another walking track was added to encompass tress and connect the houses to the beach which people can go swimming on it. Two sailing boats were added to the south coast of the village close to the peir.

The two maps illustrate significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
The usual preposition for "island" is "on" not "in".  Revise: "on the island".on the island
in the island
 transformed into the coastal village containing Consider using "all the".all the
all of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 services.

Overall
, the region developed substantially
 from an uninhabited area to a tourist attraction. Obviously
, Infrastructure and amenities increased, along with the area's capacity to provide for tourists.

As the original plan reveals, there was no living in the land. The northern and southern parts of the region was the sea. In contrast
, the island had Possible spelling mistake found.preservedper served
perserved
 the trees.

However
, the area had reformed into a holiday destination, attracting much more sightseers who were accommodated
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 holiday cottages in the central and western side of the land. To provide services for guests, a reception office had been built
 between the tourist accommodations, encircling by a vehicle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
 to access to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 facilities including a pier as well
 as a restaurant that backs on to it. Similarly
, in the center, a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 footpath connects the settlements with each other, while another walking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to encompass tress and connect the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 to the beach which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can go swimming on it. Two sailing boats were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the south coast of the village close to the Possible spelling mistake found.parparepèrearewerepart
peir
. 