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online education is becoming more and more popular some people claim that e learning has so many benefits

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People have different views about whether or not computers and online ones can replace face-to-face classes. On the one hand, many people believe that digital learning will eventually replace the traditional system due to a variety of advantages. At first, online conferences and the internet have been used extensively for distant learning. physical distance are no longer a barrier to learning with these tools. For example, due to the pandemic, where all physical social connections must be avoided, e-learning is the only method for students all over the world to study. Secondly, online lessons are some kind of time saver, because students can learn anything and anywhere if they have access to a computer that can connect to the internet. On the other hand, learning online comes with its own set of difficulties that might be hard to overcome. Firstly, school is the special place where the students develop their social interaction skills. Secondly, teachers play vital role in the educational system, and computers can only support instructions, not replace human interaction offered by teachers. As an example, teacher is able to have better control and eye contact with the students and give full feedback to their work. In conclusion, people have variety of opinions about computer based educational system, replacing old time school system. I think that computers can only support traditional teaching method in its own way, but will not replace it.
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IELTS academic online education is becoming more and more popular some people claim that e learning has so many benefits

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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