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Population growth for three major Australian cities,1992-2017

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The given the graph depicts the population growth for three major Australian Cities Melbourne, sydney and Brisbane from 1992 to 2017. Overal, there has been a significant increase in the population growth three major Australian cities melbourne, sydney and Brisbane. the In 1992, population of Melbourne and Sydney was just above 20 thousand and 25 thousand. There has been a slight decrease in the population from 1993 to 1995 in both sydney and Melbourne. However, after 1995, the population of Melbourne hiked and reached population of roughly 110 thousand in 2017. Likewise, the population of Brisbane accelerated from approximately 20 thousand in 1992 to roughly 50 thousand in 2017. Although sydney started out with the most population growth in 1992, the population growth increased to about 45 thousand in 2017, just below the population growth of Melbourne.
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for three major Australian Cities Melbourne,
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sydney
and Brisbane from 1992 to 2017.

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, there has been a significant increase in the
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three major Australian cities
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melbourne
,
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sydney
and Brisbane.

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In 1992,
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of Melbourne and Sydney was
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above 20 thousand and 25 thousand. There has been a slight decrease in the
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from

1993 to 1995 in both
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sydney
and Melbourne.
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, after 1995, the
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of Melbourne hiked and reached
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of roughly 110 thousand in 2017.
Likewise
, the
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of Brisbane accelerated from approximately 20 thousand in 1992 to roughly 50 thousand in 2017. Although
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sydney
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out with the most
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in 1992, the
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increased to about 45 thousand in 2017,
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below the
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of Melbourne.
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IELTS academic Population growth for three major Australian cities, 1992-2017

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