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Successful sport professional con eeln a just dost more money the people in other important professions. Some people think justificed while others think it is not fair, seits both these and give your opinion.

Successful sport professional con eeln a just dost more money the people in other important professions. Some people think justificed while others think it is not fair, seits both these and give your opinion. rbn0l
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It is fact that spouts person gain high
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pald
income than
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people
in argued that
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fair
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considere
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well-knowns
other it is
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absidulity
professions
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Hary
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colorect
that it is not it is not
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fair
for others

Those who as they
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think
know that about is
fully
satisfied athletes
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hardwork
they do in order
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ito
achieve country life 102
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thout
to
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make
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fallers
strict
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deit
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gand
in doing competitions worries nation proud to medals tie they spend their
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as will as
maintain their body

However
,
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some
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criticise
that it is not well for the to
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get
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wother
sector
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people
.
Firstly
spend more Home 3 Other
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feed
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hustere
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os
merry they spend
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fou
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elobouate
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move
such as Scientists years to invent one things like
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medisimes
technology
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aand
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mm. for all of this they
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be spending more they could not home in their life whereas in the ad life
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gain high paid amounts

the
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sturen
According to me. It is
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unfaire
for professionals
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they
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stillge
their home
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fro
search of doing
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good
for better they
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which
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work
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frust
sing to
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populare
they remain
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for conclusion,
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people
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IELTS academic Successful sport professional con eeln a just dost more money the people in other important professions. Some people think justificed while others think it is not fair, seits both these and give your opinion.

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