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The Bar Chart compares the percentage of male and female in Australia who were involved in daily physical workouts in the year of 2010 for six different age groups.

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The Bar Chart compares the percentage of male and female in Australia who were involved in daily physical workouts in the year of 2010 for six different age groups. Overall, the Bar Chart portrays that among the six different age groups of Australian male and female, the percentage for involving in physical activity of female were greater in five age groups. Only in one of the age groups, the men shared more percentile than that of women. In age group 45 to 54, most females were engaged in physical exercises which was 53. 3% and men in that age group accounted for only 43. 1%. Similarly, in the age group of 25-34, 35-44 and 55-64, the percentage of women was more than the percentage of men. In one of the age groups ranging from age 65 and over it experienced nearly same percentage of involvement of men and women which were 46. 7% and 47. 1% respectively. In the age range of 15 to 24, males’ participation in physical workouts were greater than that of the females’ where males shared 52. 8%, while females’ share was 47. 7%.
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IELTS academic The Bar Chart compares the percentage of male and female in Australia who were involved in daily physical workouts in the year of 2010 for six different age groups.

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