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This plan shows the updated airport construction. In which next year people plan to make a renovation.

This plan shows the updated airport construction. In which next year people plan to make a renovation. ke6Ad

The given map illustrates future renovated airport changes. In general, the most notable feature is that in the future there will be 10 more gates added to the airport. Moreover, the walkway will be changed into a sky train, because of the expansion of territory. In addition, some facilities are going to be added or changed. However, the airport services like(security passport control and customs) are not going to be switched.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 map illustrates future renovated airport This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
.

In general
, the most notable feature is that in the future there will be 10 more gates This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the airport. Moreover
, the walkway will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 into a sky train, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the expansion of territory. In addition
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 facilities are going to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
. However
, the airport services like(security passport control and customs) are not going to be switched
. 

IELTS academic This plan shows the updated airport construction. In which next year people plan to make a renovation.

Academic

American English

2 paragraphs

71 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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