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This plan shows the updated airport construction. In which next year people plan to make a renovation.

This plan shows the updated airport construction. In which next year people plan to make a renovation. ke6Ad
The given map illustrates future renovated airport changes. In general, the most notable feature is that in the future there will be 10 more gates added to the airport. Moreover, the walkway will be changed into a sky train, because of the expansion of territory. In addition, some facilities are going to be added or changed. However, the airport services like(security passport control and customs) are not going to be switched.
The
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given
map illustrates future renovated airport
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changes
.

In general
, the most notable feature is that in the future there will be 10 more gates
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added
to the airport.
Moreover
, the walkway will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
into a sky train,
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because
of the expansion of territory.
In addition
,
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some
facilities are going to be
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added
or
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changed
.
However
, the airport services like(security passport control and customs) are not going to
be switched
.
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IELTS academic This plan shows the updated airport construction. In which next year people plan to make a renovation.

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
71 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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