Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The graph shows the number of fatal injuries (resulting in death) of workers in New Zealand between 1992 and 2010.

The graph shows the number of fatal injuries (resulting in death) of workers in New Zealand between 1992 and 2010. o6EyX

The given bar chart examines the total number of workers deaths caused by deadly injuries in New Zealand over eighteen years from 1992 until 2010. Overall, the number of fatalities fluctuated, though there was a modest decrease at the end of the period compared to the beginning of the survey. First and foremost, the number of injuries started at approximately 6. 217 accidents and had risen in two following years until it reached its peak at 6. 632 in 1994. It can be seen that the pattern had been stagnant between 1995 and 2003, except for the year 1997, which showed a tiny increase compared to the previous year, then it had dipped moderately until 2002. However, in 2004, the number had climbed by 200 and reached 5. 764. It is a period of gradual increment from 2002 to 2006. Then it dropped significantly to 4. 551 in 2009.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 bar chart examines the total You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of workers deaths caused by deadly injuries in New Zealand over eighteen years from 1992 until 2010. Overall
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of fatalities fluctuated, though there was a modest decrease at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period compared to the beginning of the survey.

First
 and foremost, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of injuries This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 at approximately 6. 217 accidents and had risen in two following years until it reached its peak at 6. 632 in 1994. It can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the pattern had been stagnant between 1995 and 2003, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 1997, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 a tiny increase compared to the previous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
, then it had dipped moderately
 until 2002.

However
, in 2004, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 had climbed by 200 and reached 5. 764. It is a period of gradual increment from 2002 to 2006. Then it dropped significantly
 to 4. 551 in 2009. 