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Students are using computers more often in class than ever before. Discuss advantages and disadvantages.

Students are using computers more often in class than ever before. Discuss advantages and disadvantages. YkVPn

Many people think that the use of computers by students in school will help them to master this lesson. Some are completely against this idea. In the following essay, I will discuss both views and substantiate my point. On the one hand, knowledge of computer technology has become a modern requirement today. Because it has unlimited storage and exchange of information. Plus, it's much easier to study science on a computer. Hundreds of pieces of information can be found in one minute. It also saves a lot of time at school. This can be a solution to a lack of time for lessons. In addition, computers have also entered our daily lives. With built-in messengers, we can communicate with our distant relatives and friends. On the other hand, a person sitting in front of a computer has tense muscles in the neck, head, arms, and shoulders. As a result, the spine becomes overweight. Children are more likely to use it when lying on a table due to spinal fatigue. This can lead to osteochondrosis in adults and scoliosis in children. In short, while the benefits of using a computer are high, it is just as harmful to human health.

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