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Stock market quarterly watch 2014

Stock market quarterly watch 2014 jG5a

The line graph depicts the information regarding the Fluctuation of the stock market index from march 01 to march 19. Focusing on the details, it can be noted that in the first march stock index stood at nearly 1. 05. But, after 3 days this number plunged gradually and in 4th march it reached to nearly 1. 3836; however, proportion of if reduced significantly to 1. 1 in march 05. Although, followed by next two days stock index soared by almost 1. 0; then it plummeted drastically and figure stood at roughly 1. 069 which is quite similar as march 01. After, march 09 there is a significant increment noted in stock index where number escalated to 1. 3 which is the highest stock index throughout the period. However, from the march 16 a dramatic declined trend observed for stock index. Overall. it can be inferred that though during the period stock index Fluctuated a lot; also it peaked several times in this timeline.

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index
 from The month "March" needs to be capitalized.March
march
 01 to The month "March" needs to be capitalized.March
march
 19.

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details
, it can be noted
 that in the first
 march stock You use this word too often, consider replacing it withindicatorratio
index
 stood at nearly
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But
, after 3 days this number plunged gradually
 and in 4th march it reached to nearly
 1. 3836; however
, proportion of if This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
significantly
 to 1. 1 in The month "March" needs to be capitalized.March
march
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Although
, followed by next
 two days stock You use this word too often, consider replacing it withindicatorratio
index
 soared by almost 1. 0; then it plummeted drastically
 and figure stood at roughly 1. 069 which is quite similar as The month "March" needs to be capitalized.March
march
 01.

“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
, The month "March" needs to be capitalized.March
march
 09 there is a significant increment noted in stock You use this word too often, consider replacing it withindicatorratio
index
 where number escalated to 1. 3 which is the highest stock You use this word too often, consider replacing it withindicatorratio
index
 throughout the period. However
, from the The month "March" needs to be capitalized.March
march
 16 a dramatic declined trend observed for stock index.

Overall
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 can be inferred
 that though during the period stock You use this word too often, consider replacing it withindicatorratio
index
 Fluctuated a lot; also
 it peaked several times in this timeline. 