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The map details a pentland in 1980 and alterations over a twenty-seven year period. Overall, it is evident that the town became more developed with the addition of recreational centers, residential and commercial buildings. In 1980, both the south western and south eastern part of petland were left totally undeveloped with only grasslands and a little extention of a car park respectively. However, by 2007, a cinema alongside a shop were constructed on the bottom left of the road while to the opposite where several houses and three shops. Moving to the upper part of pentland, the sea in 1980 has been converted to a yatch marina with road extension at both sides, having a park just beneath the left road and three apartments beneath the right. The industrial area to the western part of pentland dating back to 1980 have been demolished and replaced with multi-storey, a swimming pool and multiple shops. To the eastern part are many shops while the road at the centre remained the same.

The map This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 a Possible spelling mistake found.pent landpeatland
pentland
 in 1980 and alterations over a When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "twenty-seven-year"twenty-seven-year
twenty-seven year
 period. Overall
, it is evident that the town became more developed with the addition of recreational centers, residential and commercial buildings.

In 1980, both the south western and This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.south-easternsoutheastern
south eastern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorchunkanysharesectionfactor
part
 of Possible spelling mistake found.wetlandpet landpeatland
petland
 were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
totally
 undeveloped with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 grasslands and a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
Possible spelling mistake found.extensionextent ion
extention
 of a car park respectively
. However
, by 2007, a cinema alongside a shop were constructed
 on the bottom This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 while to the opposite where several This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 and three shops.

Moving to the upper You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorchunkanysharesectionfactor
part
 of Possible spelling mistake found.pent landpeatland
pentland
, the sea in 1980 has been converted
 to a Possible spelling mistake found.matchcatchwatchbatchpatchhatch
yatch
 marina with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 extension at both sides, having a park This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 beneath the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 and three apartments beneath the right. The industrial area to the western You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorchunkanysharesectionfactor
part
 of Possible spelling mistake found.pent landpeatland
pentland
 dating back to 1980 have been demolished
 and replaced with Possible spelling mistake found.multistory
multi-storey
, a swimming pool and multiple shops. To the eastern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorchunkanysharesectionfactor
part
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 shops while the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 at the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 remained the same. 