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The map details a pentland in 1980 and alterations over a twenty-seven year period. Overall, it is evident that the town became more developed with the addition of recreational centers, residential and commercial buildings. In 1980, both the south western and south eastern part of petland were left totally undeveloped with only grasslands and a little extention of a car park respectively. However, by 2007, a cinema alongside a shop were constructed on the bottom left of the road while to the opposite where several houses and three shops. Moving to the upper part of pentland, the sea in 1980 has been converted to a yatch marina with road extension at both sides, having a park just beneath the left road and three apartments beneath the right. The industrial area to the western part of pentland dating back to 1980 have been demolished and replaced with multi-storey, a swimming pool and multiple shops. To the eastern part are many shops while the road at the centre remained the same.
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pentland
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