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The bar chart below shows the amount spent on different types of advertising in the USA in 2003 and 2004. The table shows the six sectors which spent the most on advertising in the USA in 2003 and 2004. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart gives information about how six different types of advertising and the table illustrates six sectors that were spending the most on advertising, in the USA from 2003 to 2004. Overall, in 2003 and 2004, the most spending on advertising was the local newspapers, but network radio was responsible for the lowest costing. There were six sectors in the table, of which four sectors were always on the top and did not change its positions each, but automotive sector was the highest position. In the bar chart, spending money on the local newspapers peaked at over 25 billion of dollars and merely under 30 billion of dollars, in 2003 and 2004, respectively, followed by that of network TV and magazines, but the former was always higher than the latter. Finally, network radio which spent the lowest money and both figures in 2003 and 2004 were approximately the equal. As for the table, the automotive and retail sectors were always on the top, but financial services and food and beverages sectors were always at the bottom. However, there was a change in their positions between the financial services and food and beverages sector while the two first positions did not change their positions.
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financial services and food and beverages
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the amount spent on different types of advertising in the USA in 2003 and 2004. The table shows the six sectors which spent the most on advertising in the USA in 2003 and 2004.

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