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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change . Others, however think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however think that change is always a good thing. 9X5W
In the salad days of millenium, the society is polarised into two graph almost equally reagarding the notion that we do many activities on daily basis, we will get bore one day to doing this. So that's why some people take changes in their life. Different people have distinct mindset the following paragraphs would shed light on both the approaches before making the final sheet. To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its flavour. First and foremost, some people may more comfortable while doing same things in daily routine. Due to the fact that, they will not need to takes change in that activities because they have already perform it with good way. Secondly, the masses are prefer following their daily habits they do not want to step outside from their comfort zone. Due to the fact that, they feel satisfied with their circumstance. For instance, in some companies employees do work in which they are perfect because they have habitual of that and that work easy for them to perform. Shifting towards the second school of thought that change is vital in our life. It is the way to gain more knowledge towards our work as well as we learn how to work with various method and new techniques. Moreover, learning a new things also develop new ideas and give new opportunities which would be more beneficial for everyone. To epitome, a businessman who do experiment on busniess and failure in his or her business they will use new strategies to reach at more higher level, with the help of some changes in strategies. To sum up, I believe that changes is essential to learn new things and implement these things in a routine, to make our life exciting.
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, the society is
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polarised
into two
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graph
almost
equally
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reagarding
the notion that we do
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many
activities on daily basis, we will
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get
bore one day to doing this.
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So
that's why
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some
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people
take
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changes
in their life.
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Different
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people
have distinct mindset the following paragraphs would shed light on both the approaches
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before
making the final sheet. To commence with the
first
notion, there are myriad things to
be shared
in its
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flavour
.
First
and foremost,
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some
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people
may more comfortable while doing same things in daily routine. Due to the fact that, they will not need to
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takes
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change
in that activities
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because
they have already
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perform
it with
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good
way.
Secondly
, the masses are
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prefer
following their daily habits they do not want to step outside from their comfort zone. Due to the fact that, they feel satisfied with their circumstance.
For instance
, in
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some
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companies
employees do
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work
in which they are perfect
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because
they have habitual of that and that
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work
easy for them to perform. Shifting towards the second school of
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thought
that
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change
is vital in our life. It is the way to gain more knowledge towards our
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work
as well
as we learn how to
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work
with various method and
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new
techniques.
Moreover
, learning a
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new
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things
also
develop
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new
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ideas
and give
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new
opportunities which would be more beneficial for everyone. To epitome, a businessman who do experiment on
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busniess
and failure in
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his or her
business they will
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use
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new
strategies to reach at
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more higher
level, with the
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help
of
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some
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changes
in strategies. To sum up, I believe that
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changes
is essential to learn
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new
things and implement these things in a routine, to
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make
our life exciting.
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IELTS academic Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however think that change is always a good thing.

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