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some people it is important to plan future beforehand and other thinks of it as problematic issue. to what extent do you agree?

some people it is important to plan future beforehand and other thinks of it as problematic issue. 0E7BG
Planning is very intelligent process. some maximisers always plan beforehand before moving further. I am a strong advocate of this approach. All the meaningful reasons discussion will be covered in this paragraph. To begin with, we always plan when it concern our mind to have a serious discussion about any specific topic. then we take things in proper way and always tend to make things easier with planning. It looks a good idea when we think about studies or higher studies. In these types of cases, children always have some pre-set of minds. in which they already want to become something. It leads to several considerations where they first have to choose courses and diplomas. so, Planning is helpful in this also. Moreover, In some minor cases, As an illustration, a wedding, A wedding always need planning first and starting. if we plan for wedding then doing things at time can result in some conclusion, like we might run out of money, or, things might get heptic and confused. In Conclusion, planning is always a good choice to make. because planning always results in positive value never in negative value.
Planning
is
very
intelligent process.
some
maximisers
always plan beforehand
before
moving
further
. I am a strong advocate of this approach. All the meaningful
reasons
discussion will
be covered
in this paragraph. To
begin
with, we always plan when it
concern
our mind to have a serious discussion about any specific topic.
then
we take things in proper way and always tend to
make
things easier with
planning
. It looks a
good
idea
when we
think
about studies or higher studies. In these types of cases, children always have
some
pre-set
of minds.
in
which they already want to become something. It leads to several considerations where they
first
have to
choose courses and diplomas.
so
,
Planning
is helpful in this
also
.
Moreover
, In
some
minor cases, As an illustration, a wedding, A wedding always need
planning
first
and starting.
if
we plan for wedding then doing things at time can result in
some
conclusion, like we might run out of money, or, things might
get
heptic
and confused.
In Conclusion
,
planning
is always a
good
choice to
make
.
because
planning
always results in
positive
value never in
negative
value.
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