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Some people believe that in tight situation we should select a un desirable job but other think it is right time to work hard not easy

Some people believe that in tight situation we should select a un desirable job but other think it is right time to work hard not easy ewQxB
Nowadays, job satisfaction has become a controversial issue. Although, there are some people who accept and jobs in term of money, while others believe that it is better to try for more and hoping for best possibilities. In my view, I believe that, for having a better opportunity only lies with keep trying attitude. On the one hand, of discussion, regarding those who accept easily like unsatisfactory job or low wages. In other words, there are some people who do not wait for longtime for having best opportunity because of their financial needs. For example, they need money for their daily expenses and loan repayment. In addition, responsibility towards their family, force them to stick to the uninteresting and monotonous job. Even there are some, who do not want to waste time and efforts. On the other hand, proponents of this argument is that, it is better to work on ourselves by improving skills and wait for better opportunity. Keep trying is always the best approach to find global recognition. For instance, J. K Rowling, an author of Harry Potter series, was rejected about more than 20 times for her book publishing by investors. But, her resisting attitude had not lost hope. Now, she is one of the renown author of the world because of that book. In conclusion, despite some indispensable situations, we cannot ignore the importance of skills, that actually, should be updated with time to time. In my opinion, after getting rid of problems, one should have to go for more. This tendency, brings best out of a person
Nowadays,
job
satisfaction has become a controversial issue. Although, there are
some
people
who
accept and
jobs
in term of money, while others believe that it is
better
to try for more and hoping for
best
possibilities. In my view, I believe that, for having a
better
opportunity
only
lies with
keep
trying attitude.

On the one hand, of discussion, regarding those
who
accept
easily
like unsatisfactory
job
or low wages.
In other words
, there are
some
people
who
do not wait for longtime for having
best
opportunity
because
of their financial needs.
For example
, they need money for their daily expenses and loan repayment.
In addition
, responsibility towards their family, force them to stick to the uninteresting and monotonous
job
. Even there are
some
,
who
do not want to waste
time
and efforts.

On the other hand
, proponents of this argument is that, it is
better
to work on ourselves by improving
skills
and wait for
better
opportunity.
Keep
trying is always the
best
approach to find global recognition.
For instance
, J. K Rowling, an author of Harry Potter series,
was rejected
about more than 20
times
for her book publishing by investors.
But
, her resisting attitude had not lost hope.
Now
, she is one of the renown author of the world
because
of that book.

In conclusion
, despite
some
indispensable situations, we cannot
ignore
the importance of
skills
, that actually, should
be updated
with
time
to
time
. In my opinion, after getting rid of problems, one should
have to
go for more. This tendency, brings
best
out of a
person
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IELTS academic Some people believe that in tight situation we should select a un desirable job but other think it is right time to work hard not easy

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