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Some claim that men are naturally more competitive than women. do you agree or disagree with this statement

Some claim that men are naturally more competitive than women. PkVld

A handful of individuals stated that males are naturally more competitive than females. From my perspective, I strongly disagree because I believe that both gender are competitive enough, moreover, also are balance when it comes to handling any duties. Nowadays both sexualities agree to compete with each other no matter what field or profession it is. Furthermore, it is not tedious nor monotonous to create such an atmosphere it will just ameliorate numerous things. For example, a female industrialist fight against. Male pioneer to keep the point, it was not an arcane or furtive discussion. In addition, the two genders are competitive enough and it is not a detrimental trait. The women in this era compete with anyone and not only the men who are naturally more competitive and strong. On the other hand, thee are multifarious juggernaut articles that claimed that both genders are naturally competitive because it is a human trait. On top f that males nowadays just do what they want to do, meanwhile, females also do the same thing so that they can can achieve and obtain what they want. For instance, a journalist commented that both sexualities fight and compete no matter what is the reason. Men can insular theirselves and women an come and rise, however, the opposite can be occurred too it depends on the situation and not on the genders. At the end of the day I firmly disagree that the males are naturally more competitive than females I feel that both genders are competitive enough and can fight in any circumstances.

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