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The given table illustrates how consumers spent on various items in five countries(Italy, Ireland, Spain, Sweden and Turkey) in the year 2002. Overall, Turkey is the highest in department of food, drinks and tobacco, whereas Italy is holding the last position. In clothing and footwear, Italy acquires first position and Sweden stands at last. In leisure and education Turkey holds highest share and spain is the least in this segment. In Turkey, 32. 14% of the consumers spent on food, drinks, tobacco which is the highest percentage when compared to all given countries. To the contrary, Sweden is the least spending 15. 77% in these items. In clothing and footwear, 9% of the consumers purchased in Italy which stands top at this department whereas, sweden stands at last with 5. 40%. Overall all countries expenditure is less than 5% in leisure and education. In Turkey, leisure and education are given higher priority when compared to all other countries which is 4. 35%.
The
given
table illustrates how consumers spent on various

items in five countries(Italy, Ireland, Spain, Sweden and Turkey)

in the year 2002.

Overall
, Turkey is the highest in department of food, drinks and tobacco, whereas

Italy is holding the last position. In clothing and footwear, Italy
acquires


first
position and Sweden stands at last. In leisure and education Turkey holds
highest
share and
spain
is the least in this segment.

In Turkey, 32. 14% of the consumers spent on food, drinks, tobacco which is the highest percentage when compared to all
given
countries. To the contrary, Sweden is the least spending 15. 77% in these items. In clothing and footwear, 9% of the consumers
purchased
in Italy which stands top at this department whereas,
sweden
stands at last with 5. 40%.
Overall
all
countries
expenditure is less than 5% in leisure and education. In Turkey, leisure and education are
given
higher priority when compared to all other

countries which is 4. 35%.
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IELTS academic 1451

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  American English
4 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
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