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The percentage of school aged boys in 5 sports in the UK in 2010

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The table gives information about the propotion of 6-11 years old and 12-16 years old boys who taked part in 5 different sports in the UK in 2010. It is clear that football was the sport that attracted boys in 2 age groups the most and swimming seemed to be the least interesting sport for these boys among 5 different sports. Beside, boys at aged 6-16 are likely to do more sports than boys at aged 12-16. From 6-11 years old, the percentage of boys who playing football was the highest, at 87%, almost twice times higher than the second popular sport which was cricket with 45% of boys. And the figures for rugby and swimming were the lowest, at 23% and 19% respectively. 78% of 12-16 years old boys enjoyed playing football, compared to just 34% of boys playing cricket and 25% of boys playing basketball at the same age. From 12-16 years old, rugby and swimming still had the lowest propotion of boys who interested in these sports, which account for 21% and 19% respectively.
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part in 5
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in the UK in 2010.

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that football was the
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that attracted
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boys
in 2 age groups the most and swimming seemed to be the least interesting
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sport
for these
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boys
among 5
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sports
. Beside,
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boys
at aged 6-16 are likely to do more
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sports
than
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boys
at aged 12-16.

From 6-11 years
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, the percentage of
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playing
football was the highest, at 87%, almost twice times higher than the second popular
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sport
which was cricket with 45% of
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boys
. And the figures for rugby and swimming were the lowest, at 23% and 19%
respectively
.

78% of 12-16 years
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boys
enjoyed
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football, compared to
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34% of
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cricket and 25% of
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basketball at the same age. From 12-16 years
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, rugby and swimming
still
had the lowest
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, which account for 21% and 19%
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