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School cafeteria at university

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Children can also develop social skills in these spaces. School cafeterias allow our children to spend time with their classmates outside of the classroom, in a more relaxed and pleasant environment. For instance, they can sit with new friends and establish relationships with different people or strengthen bonds with those they already know. Many schools, colleges, universities, or workplaces usually provide the cafeterias. If you are ones who work or study and do not have time to cook by yourselves, eating at cafeterias will be a good choice for you. It is quite convenient. However, everything has both the pros and cons. You can see the pros and cons from the followings. The advantages of eating at cafeterias are saving eating cost, saving time, and providing various kinds of food. The cost of food sold at most cafeterias is controlled by each organization. Accordingly, the food is not expensive. Thus, the eating cost can be saved. Besides, eating at cafeterias is also time saved and easy for buying food because they are usually located nearby the study buildings or offices. Furthermore, there are several food options for you to select. For example; Jook’s Restaurant, one of the most popular restaurants in Nakhon Sri Thammarat Rajabhat University’s cafeteria provides more than thirty menus. Consequently, having a meal at cafeterias is as pleased as punch. The disadvantages of eating at cafeterias are low quality of food, crowded atmosphere, and insufficient seats. In addition, the ingredients that they use contain a lot of toxin. These may lead customers to both long term and short term illness. Not only the low quality of food but the cafeterias also are crowded. We can be annoyed and disturbed while we are having a meal. Finally, sometimes there are no available tables and chairs for us especially at lunch time. How hungry and angry we are! If we go to restaurants which are not so crowded, we can find comfortable seats and have our meal happily. In conclusion, eating at cafeterias can help us save both time and money. We can also choose food in several options. Nevertheless, some food may be poisonous. Lastly, everything has both pros and cons. It depends on us to decide where the best and
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also
develop social
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skills
in these spaces. School
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cafeterias
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allow
our children to spend
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time
with their classmates
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outside of
the classroom, in a more relaxed and pleasant environment.
For instance
, they can sit with new friends and establish relationships with
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different
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people
or strengthen bonds with those they already know.

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Many
schools, colleges, universities, or workplaces
usually
provide the
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cafeterias
. If you are ones who work or study and do not have
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time
to cook by yourselves,
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eating
at
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cafeterias
will be a
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good
choice for you. It is quite convenient.
However
, everything has both the pros and cons. You can
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see
the pros and cons from the followings.

The advantages of
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eating
at
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cafeterias
are saving
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eating
cost, saving
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time
, and providing various kinds of
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food
. The cost of
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food
sold at most
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cafeterias
is controlled
by each organization.
Accordingly
, the
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food
is not expensive.
Thus
, the
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eating
cost can
be saved
.
Besides
,
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eating
at
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cafeterias
is
also
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time
saved and easy for buying
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food
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because
they are
usually
located nearby the study buildings or offices.
Furthermore
, there are several
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food
options for you to select.
For example
;
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Jook
’s Restaurant, one of the most popular restaurants in
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Nakhon
Sri
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Thammarat
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Rajabhat
University’s
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cafeteria
provides more than thirty menus.
Consequently
, having a meal at
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cafeterias
is as
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pleased
as punch.

The disadvantages of
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eating
at
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cafeterias
are low quality of
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food
, crowded atmosphere, and insufficient seats.
In addition
, the ingredients that they
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use
contain
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a lot of toxin
. These may lead customers to both long term and short term illness. Not
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only
the low quality of
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food
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but
the
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cafeterias
also
are crowded
. We can
be annoyed
and disturbed while we are having a meal.
Finally
,
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sometimes
there are no available tables and chairs for us
especially
at lunch
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time
. How hungry and angry we are! If we go to restaurants which are not
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so
crowded, we can find comfortable seats and have our meal
happily
.

In conclusion
,
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eating
at
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cafeterias
can
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help
us save both
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time
and money. We can
also
choose
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food
in several options.
Nevertheless
,
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some
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food
may be poisonous.
Lastly
, everything has both pros and cons. It depends on us to decide where the best
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IELTS academic School cafeteria at university

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372 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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