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advantages and disadvantages of being famous

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FAME HAS BOTH DARK AND BRIGHT SIDE Nowadays the majority of people are interested in stardom and aspire to be famous. It is widely believed that celebrities have a wonderful life without no worries or problems. However, is being famous so easy? Some people are aware of the fact that fame can bring both advantages and drawbacks. Thus, being a celebrity or simply being famous has it own pros and cons. The main advantages of being a star is that you can make money very easily, using your image to promote brands as an example. Additionally, celebrities get a special treatment everywhere they go. For instance, they get special tables at restaurant, best sit at theaters and VIP treatments at clubs or events. Moreover, it always a pleasure to feel that you are admired for by someone. On the other hand, Although the possibility of being recognized for what you’re or for something you did, can seem very appealing, it may also put you in some odd or uncomfortable situations. For example, when you are trying to have a relaxing dinner with your friends in a restaurant, you might suddenly be interrupted for by your fan or even for paparazzi. Therefore, famous people can not do things that the average person can and they do not have privacy. In conclusion I can say that a well-know person’s life has a bright and a dark side. As far as I am concerned that, not everyone will be able to cope with fame.

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