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Sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

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These two tables shows the sales of Fair trade labeled coffee and banana in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Overall, sales of both coffee and bananas exhibit increase in 2004 then the 1999. Switzerland presents the highest number of coffee sales in 1999 while UK shows the highest is 20 millions of euros in 2004. On the other side, Switzerland shows the best selling for bananas on both 1999 and 2004 years. The sales of coffee in UK was increased massively from 1999 to 2004. Also, sales of coffee 3 millions of euros in Switzerland on 1999 and then it was elevated into two fold on 2004. Other coffee sales of Denmark, Belgium and Sweden shows slight increase from 1999 to 2004. Banana sales in UK shows almost five fold rising on 2004 than the 1999. It is shown in the table as one millions of euros and 5. 5 millions of euros respectively. Belgium also shows a good rising for banana selling in 2004 for than the 1999. Sweden shows only 0. 2 million of euros increments while Denmark showing a drop down in sales of bananas in 2004
These two tables
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and banana in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

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of both
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and bananas exhibit increase in 2004 then the 1999. Switzerland presents the highest number of
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coffee
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sales
in 1999 while UK
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the highest is 20
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of euros in 2004. On the other side, Switzerland
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best selling
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was increased
massively
from 1999 to 2004.
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of Denmark, Belgium and Sweden
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slight increase from 1999 to 2004.

Banana
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in UK
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almost five
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rising on 2004 than the 1999. It
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rising for banana selling in 2004 for than the 1999. Sweden
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IELTS academic Sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

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