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The pie chart compares the information about students graduating specialized in Anthropology worked or continued to study after finishing their undergraduate course whereas the table shows the wages of anthropologists having five year experience of work. From an overall perspective, regarding the pie chart, it is obvious that half of the graduate students enroll in full time jobs while part time work and postgraduate students take the least composition of the chart. Half of the students work directly after finishing their undergraduate course, accounting for 52%. In contrast, the part time work is significantly less than full time work, resulting in 15% followed by unemployed graduates(only 12%). The number of students taking full time postgraduate study and that of unknown are equal percentages. Regarding the table, the salary of people who work under private companies is slightly more than that of working under other two types of work. 35% of people working under private companies get $50000 to 74999 whereas 100 out of 15 freelancers get that amount of money. regarding the wage over $100000, the amount of salary go to government slaves followed by freelance consultants and private companies respectively.
The pie chart compares the information about
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graduating specialized in Anthropology worked or continued to study after finishing their undergraduate course whereas the table
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the wages of anthropologists having five year experience of work.

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perspective, regarding the pie chart, it is obvious that half of the graduate
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enroll in full
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jobs while part
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time
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and postgraduate
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take the least composition of the chart.

Half of the
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directly
after finishing their undergraduate course, accounting for 52%.
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is
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time
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, resulting in 15% followed by unemployed graduates(
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12%). The number of
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taking full
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postgraduate study and that of unknown are equal percentages.

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under private
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is
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working under private
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$50000 to 74999 whereas 100 out of 15 freelancers
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that amount of money.
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IELTS academic salaries of anthropology graduates

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